Here is a great example: Jamie is a somatic therapist with a decade of training, a waiting list of referrals, and a website that reads like it was written by someone who has never met her.
There is a saying in marketing, “You can’t read the label inside the bottle.” When you are so close to what you do and how you do it, it’s hard to see it from the outside → IN.
The copy is technically accurate. It lists her credentials, her modalities, her approach. But it doesn’t feel like her — and more importantly, it doesn’t make anyone feel anything.
Jamie’s problem isn’t unusual. It’s actually the defining challenge of wellness entrepreneurship: you’re extraordinary at what you do, and that’s exactly why writing about it is so hard.
When your work genuinely transforms people, “I offer somatic therapy sessions” feels laughably inadequate.
But “I help you reconnect with the body you’ve been at war with since the third grade” sounds too vulnerable to put on a website.
Too revealing. Too much.
So most wellness professionals land somewhere in between — in that gray zone of copy that’s technically fine and completely forgettable.
Here’s the thing though: forgettable copy has a cost. Not just in search rankings or conversion rates, though it costs you those too. It costs you the right clients…the ones who would have felt seen by your words before they ever booked a call.